Feedback Challenge
Jun. 27th, 2004 07:30 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
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boniblithe's Feedback Challenge, I received a writer named pinn2480. Here are three stories by Pinn that I read and reviewed. They are not in a category that I usually read (Dom/Elijah and the OC, about which I know almost nothing) but I enjoyed taking a look anyway.
And He's Taken All that I Just Had
A nice little ficlet. I really liked this line.
Of course, the last time Dom saw Elijah, Dom had told him it was one thing to love someone but it was a completely different thing to love breaking them.
In the Life of Each of Us
Dom/Elijah
This was a very sweet fic from an Elijah POV. I like the character voice, and it seemed very well thought out. This one links with the first with this: Every day after that, Elijah has had to exert every ounce of self-control and self-preservation he's got to stop himself from walking up to Dom and saying, "Break me."
I'm glad I took a chance on this OC/Dom crossover, Tickets. Seth meets Dom in a bar and Dom does a cool big brotherly service. I don't know Seth from Adam, but did he really try to sail to Tahiti from Southern Cal? Snerk. That's pretty damn funny. The Dom characterization is great - he's very funny, especially with this line:
"Doesn't matter, you're still too young to self-destruct. I think it should be a rule for Americans that they can't be angsty and ready to run away from their lives until they're at least twenty."
So thanks,pinn2480, for expanding my fic horizons in a very enjoyable way.
boniblithe's Feedback Challenge, I received a writer named pinn2480. Here are three stories by Pinn that I read and reviewed. They are not in a category that I usually read (Dom/Elijah and the OC, about which I know almost nothing) but I enjoyed taking a look anyway.And He's Taken All that I Just Had
A nice little ficlet. I really liked this line.
Of course, the last time Dom saw Elijah, Dom had told him it was one thing to love someone but it was a completely different thing to love breaking them.
In the Life of Each of Us
Dom/Elijah
This was a very sweet fic from an Elijah POV. I like the character voice, and it seemed very well thought out. This one links with the first with this: Every day after that, Elijah has had to exert every ounce of self-control and self-preservation he's got to stop himself from walking up to Dom and saying, "Break me."
I'm glad I took a chance on this OC/Dom crossover, Tickets. Seth meets Dom in a bar and Dom does a cool big brotherly service. I don't know Seth from Adam, but did he really try to sail to Tahiti from Southern Cal? Snerk. That's pretty damn funny. The Dom characterization is great - he's very funny, especially with this line:
"Doesn't matter, you're still too young to self-destruct. I think it should be a rule for Americans that they can't be angsty and ready to run away from their lives until they're at least twenty."
So thanks,
pinn2480, for expanding my fic horizons in a very enjoyable way.![[identity profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/openid.png){kind=small}
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Date: 2004-06-27 08:44 pm (UTC)I don't know Seth from Adam, but did he really try to sail to Tahiti from Southern Cal? Snerk. That's pretty damn funny.
Hee. It wasn't explicitly stated in the season finale that Seth was heading to Tahiti but he was shown sailing out of the harbor. At the beginning of the season he had told Ryan he was planning on sailing to Tahiti as soon as he could because he hated Newport Beach so much. Ryan made him want to stick around but since Ryan left Newport Beach, it's easy to assume Seth was going to try to sail there (and easier to assume he probably wasn't very successful).
Now that you probably know more about The O.C. then you've ever wanted, thanks again.
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Date: 2004-06-28 01:46 am (UTC)