Feedback Challenge
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boniblithe's Feedback Challenge, I received a writer named pinn2480. Here are three stories by Pinn that I read and reviewed. They are not in a category that I usually read (Dom/Elijah and the OC, about which I know almost nothing) but I enjoyed taking a look anyway.
And He's Taken All that I Just Had
A nice little ficlet. I really liked this line.
Of course, the last time Dom saw Elijah, Dom had told him it was one thing to love someone but it was a completely different thing to love breaking them.
In the Life of Each of Us
Dom/Elijah
This was a very sweet fic from an Elijah POV. I like the character voice, and it seemed very well thought out. This one links with the first with this: Every day after that, Elijah has had to exert every ounce of self-control and self-preservation he's got to stop himself from walking up to Dom and saying, "Break me."
I'm glad I took a chance on this OC/Dom crossover, Tickets. Seth meets Dom in a bar and Dom does a cool big brotherly service. I don't know Seth from Adam, but did he really try to sail to Tahiti from Southern Cal? Snerk. That's pretty damn funny. The Dom characterization is great - he's very funny, especially with this line:
"Doesn't matter, you're still too young to self-destruct. I think it should be a rule for Americans that they can't be angsty and ready to run away from their lives until they're at least twenty."
So thanks,pinn2480, for expanding my fic horizons in a very enjoyable way.
boniblithe's Feedback Challenge, I received a writer named pinn2480. Here are three stories by Pinn that I read and reviewed. They are not in a category that I usually read (Dom/Elijah and the OC, about which I know almost nothing) but I enjoyed taking a look anyway.And He's Taken All that I Just Had
A nice little ficlet. I really liked this line.
Of course, the last time Dom saw Elijah, Dom had told him it was one thing to love someone but it was a completely different thing to love breaking them.
In the Life of Each of Us
Dom/Elijah
This was a very sweet fic from an Elijah POV. I like the character voice, and it seemed very well thought out. This one links with the first with this: Every day after that, Elijah has had to exert every ounce of self-control and self-preservation he's got to stop himself from walking up to Dom and saying, "Break me."
I'm glad I took a chance on this OC/Dom crossover, Tickets. Seth meets Dom in a bar and Dom does a cool big brotherly service. I don't know Seth from Adam, but did he really try to sail to Tahiti from Southern Cal? Snerk. That's pretty damn funny. The Dom characterization is great - he's very funny, especially with this line:
"Doesn't matter, you're still too young to self-destruct. I think it should be a rule for Americans that they can't be angsty and ready to run away from their lives until they're at least twenty."
So thanks,
pinn2480, for expanding my fic horizons in a very enjoyable way.